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( Apr. 1st, 2003 04:24 pm)
I was sick for a couple of days and just did not have any energy to write... But I'm starting to feel better now. So we'll see if I can write anything remotely user-friendly.

Driving by the river,
Windows down, radio on--
The breeze in my hair.

Yup, that's what today was all about.
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( Apr. 1st, 2003 05:38 pm)
I so rarely have an issue with the number of syllables in a line of haiku, that when it happens I get totally shocked. After I logged off earlier, I suddenly said "huh?" and when I re-counted, I realized that there are SIX syllables in my first line. DAMMIT!

So, a re-write is in order...

Drive on river road,
Windows down, radio on--
The breeze in my hair.

Well, that one still captures the mood -- and the syllables are right. PHEW!
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